Sunset, four hours before Randy, Mira and Bonita entered the dark district.
I dug through the pile trying to find some sort of comfort from my pain, but all was cold and dry. I stampeded through the leaky hallways trying to find a rat, or a stray cat to temporarily appease my pain. No animal graced my eyesight, but I could hear them pattering through the walls. No mere man could ever hear their pattering through twelve inch thick stone work, but I could. I could hear every squeak; I could hear every drop of dung, I could hear every footstep that those miserable little animals made. It was torture; I could hear them so loudly, but I could not reach them to quench my thirst.
I followed the damp sewer way until I came to a small breach in the stone where someone at sometime had patched the hole with heavy wood. The wood was now rotted through, and I could actually see my little neighbors rushing by the small visible slits. I smashed my hand through the wood and observed as rats poured out of the opening. I quickly scooped up a small rat and swallowed it whole. It did not pacify me at the slightest. I snatched up several others and quickly devoured them as well, but they could not ease my pain. The rats were not warm enough. I furiously kicked the scattering pile with my altered foot, and rampaged about with my barbed sword.
My pain was somewhat relaxed or eased by my unleashed energy, but it was a quick relief. I was soon back to my bath of pain.
I looked up through a grate longingly for the freedom of the outside, but it was still daylight. I tempted the thought of venturing out anyway, but I soon rationalized that my pain was not yet that extreme.
I sat down on the pile of dead rats that lay strewn about my feet. I contemplated new ways by which I could acquire human prey, while I attempted to push past my animal body and mind. I recalled on how the wooden patchwork had so easily deposited so many little neighbors. I looked above me at the rotting wood baseboards were people would soon be walking when they broke from their heavy hangovers. I put my hooked foot in the hole I had broken and poked the ceiling with my metallic hand. The wood was soft and easy to cut… or break.
(Yeah... kinda incomplete, but I am goin someplace with this. Lots of love to all my friends who read this)
Wait so luke's post was incorrect about Tabar following them because Tabar is, by the reference to sun, in the sewers, or whatever they are and in the next day whereas the characters are all the previous night and in the surface world.
ReplyDeleteyou're backwards. this is before we venture out. this is going on while the whole Nila thing is taking place. it says "sunset" not "sunrise" and it also says "four hours before..." and despite what your comments said on Luke's post, he doesn't necessarily have to be biologically engineered to be this way, he could simply be insane and think he's a vampire or something. or maybe he is a vampire...do vampires exist?
ReplyDeleteum, ok i'm sry next time i don't understand whats going on i won't mention it and yes that comment was supposed to be a question,
ReplyDeleteBTW unless his hearing rats dropping fall through 12 inches of solid wood was him hallucinating yes he would have to be a GMO and the smell like that is what i was referring to with the inference that he was GMed. Eating people happens, its called cannibalism and people do that sometimes.
oh and someone added the time frame at the beginning thanks for assuming i'm a complete moron
ReplyDeleteOh, I must have put that in after you commented. Its all good, I dont think that anybody is a moron.
ReplyDeleteI love the smell of rainbows. Dont you?
(Responding to the comments on this post and the previous)
ReplyDeleteWhat I am trying to do is create a villain that is evil; Someone who does not have a piffy back story that makes me feel sorry for him. I have this horrible tendency to make all life redeemable, hence what I did with Shilon, Mira, and Tristy(A little bit).
We have Bartholomew, but he is the final boss, if you know what I mean. I created Taber to be the immediate threat. I wanted him to be their first real obstacle, their first major boss that makes you really scream at the TV screen as you button mash your controller. I also wanted to add an element of fear. This thing is a crazy monster. It looks and acts frightening. I dont think that has been enjoyed yet. Yeah the seekers are kinda spooky, but even they can be reasoned with. I have probably introduced the most characters of everyone,and the reason I have done that is to find who can be the actually stand up against the good guys. I have gone through ideas and characters, many I introduced and then kill off the next post, so that I can sift through and find the conflict.
I hope that Taber hasn't seemed too... gross, but I am trying to make him an evil that the characters cannot convert, nor kill with ease. I think you guys get it and so I will stop.
I'm just not going to say anything anymore. if everyone is going to get all hostile. it's just a stupid story!! I wasn't trying to imply that you are a moron, the thought had crossed my mind that it had been changed after your comment. by saying he's insane, maybe he doesn't really smell or hear anything. it's like this show Erik likes called K-Pax, there is this guy that says everyone smells. whatever.
ReplyDeleteWe have lost innocence, and now we shall never walk the road of happiness again... No I am just Kidding. He he he he! I promise that I will stop being so critical, mean, and cutting. Rather I will be a gay ole' soul.
ReplyDeleteI have a challenge for everyone. For every comment made, there must be two sincere compliments for every one miff.
I will demonstrate on my post: My Snim, I thought that it was so very interesting that Taber doesn't like the sunlight. I'm sure I will thoroughly enjoy what is coming up ahead. Now I do have a pickle regarding Taber's foot. Could you please expound on that, because right now it doesn't make much sense.
Yea!!!!