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Monday, April 6, 2009

Just trying to make amends . Randy

Randy was rather flattered that the girls wanted to wear his clothing. It's like he was some sort of monk-super model, but still he thought the girls had gone rather daft, he didn’t even remember the one they called Amber or was it Mira.

But in general his cloths stunk, no happy medium there, he missed the kind of oaky-spice that his disguise had offered previously but I had been ruined. well you can’t win every battle. But Randy absolutely refused to put on any of his tainted vestments. Though Mira agreed and mumbled something about bait. “Your sympathy is overwhelming.” Bonita seemed to get a kick out of the conflict. Randy thought to himself guess everyone is initialed to a little fun, wish it wasn’t at my expense but it was good to see that she could smile.

Mira was rambling off some jargon about how they might get themselves killed by a beast living underground. Wait a second, how do they know anything about the dark district? Randy decided to keep his insightful comment to himself. “so we're going to wander aimlessly through the dark district?”

(as they walked through town) “What happened to Cordell?” the girls disregarded the comment as we went ever deeper in to the black of night. “Ah hah! There’s the door!” Vahn Gray described it perfectly to him uprooting some lovely looking plants from a window seal. “Sorry girls I have to make amends.” To their complaints Randy rationalized “if we have no idea where this creature is, then he could be here and we wouldn't even know it.”

----the other maid----
She had finally gotten out of the bath. She had scrubbed so furiously to get the wretched smell out her skin was red, and she had finally given up with the battle half won as the sweet smell was only slightly strong on her. Still in her robes she plopped down on the couch. “If it’s the last time I see that good for nothing know it all-oh it would only be too soon!”

There was a knock on the door. She grabbed a nearby pillow and screamed into it, she did not want to open the door right now. All she wanted was a meal and go to bed. “Though it might be Metty” she thought to herself and was the only reason she even went over to the door, “talking to a girlfriend right now would really help. Stupid men.”

She began to rant as she walked to wardsthe door, “that stupid inconsiderate black smear on reality, Metty let me tell you of this no good trouble making hazard named –“ swinging the door open. “Randy!?!”

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in the distance honing in on the horrid horrid! quest, the quest of silence

“Gah! Why don’t these mites just die!” the smells were giving Taber a headache. The peace he had received from his first victim was short lived as the reeking smells seemed to taunt him getting closer and not stopping! “I will find peace-if it’s the last thing I do! ... all I want is a little peace. Just a little peace…”


Leaning over a ledge on one of the many towering buildings in the dark district, Taber Leveret was getting close.

6 comments:

  1. OK... A major peive I'm having, How the heck do they know Taber's Name. How do they even know that he likes the smell of death for that matter. I know that as authors we know, but our characters do not. It would be like all of a sudden knowing the vaccine to a disease that has just come about.

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  2. It is one thing for a character to be wise or mystical, but right now they are being omnicient

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  3. Shilon does his homework and he is basically a super spy with mad crazy abilities. My apologies for letting him know something out of the ordinary, it ended up not mattering anyways. Luke seems to want a confrontation with him(Taber).

    I was just giving them a way to hide from him sense he has, or seems to have, genectically been altered with a heightened sense of smell.

    When going for medieval game play, genetic manipulation and crazy experimentation does doesn't apply. Having normal people that are extremely skilled through training and bloodlines are the norm but not genetically engineering bio weapons such as Taber.

    And if you think Shilon is your character you are wrong, I don't mind if you control him because, honestly, I didn't want to step on your toes about the Order of Peace and Madness but, your creations and chemical manufacturing are far from a medieval time frame.

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  4. As for Luke knowing his name, yes that was stupid.

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  5. Thanks Wilsk for the insight and I just want you to know that I love your body. I think that it must have been genetically altered to be so beautiful and strong.

    And I love you too Deanna. You are all my little and big friends.

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  6. I fixed it, can we try to be nicer to Luke? at least he's posting!! I changed it so that Randy doesn't think anything about Taber. take a chill pill! it's just a story! and that last comment, EW, you love his body? you're a guy, you're not supposed to love his body, that's just wrong. but I agree, if we are going to have super heroes, we should be allowed to have super villains.

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