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Sunday, April 12, 2009

Bonnie and Tamy

I tried not to blush as Will carried on and on about how he adored me. All jealous thoughts of Cordell disappeared.

"Brr, it's cold in here. Mind if I lay by you, lady?" It was a strange request, but I was too tired to argue. "Mr, you can have my bed." by that time Will was snoring heavily (though, I don't recall him ever snoring before). "You wanna be my new mommy?" she whispered softly and she snuggled closer.

By this time I was very uncomfortable, "we'll talk about it in the morning." I say we wake up early and ditch her. It wasn't long before I fell asleep.

(Tamitha) I think she’s asleep. If only I could get to know them better, though they seem very nice, I am sure they are hiding something. Once the woman started to lightly snore I slid off the bed. “I think you can come out now. They’re sleeping, so you have to keep really quiet.” I said as a dark shadow came out of the corner of the room.

"What is your desire, my master? Shall I kill the man?" he asked.

Will's eyes shot open, as he wasn't actually asleep.
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9 comments:

  1. Lord SnimApril 12, 2009 at 7:24 PM

    Thats funny, I like how this whole William and Bonnie thing is comming together. I also thought Bonita's reaction was pretty funny to Tamitha's joining her in her bed.

    This is completely up for interpretation with Tamitha being who she is, but might I just make a recomendation,not a command, but a recommendation: Tamitha is not evil, she is lost in her own world or her own disillusionment, but she is not evil. Or at least she is not blatanly evil.

    Now we could make her this young seeress who is really manipulative, or she could still be just a child with huge powers. I prefer the latter, but its up to everyone else.

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  2. DeannaApril 12, 2009 at 8:27 PM

    yeah, I was thinking she wouldn't want him dead, but I thought I would leave it hanging for suspense. mostly, she is trying to get them to warm up to her for information, like was mentioned in another post.

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  3. Lord SnimApril 12, 2009 at 8:30 PM

    Sounds cool!

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  4. WilskApril 12, 2009 at 9:13 PM

    Wait so what's going on? I kind of missed something I think, Tamitha asked or the shadow thingy asked?

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  5. Lord SnimApril 12, 2009 at 9:24 PM

    Yeah, that was something I needed clarifying too. The line "Yuck! The things I do for you people!" Who is talking? If it is to the... her friends, then wouldn't that be a bit mean?

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  6. DeannaApril 12, 2009 at 10:02 PM

    when you say "friends" are you referring to the seekers? She assumes that Will is asleep like Bonnie. she's not really a touchy feely kind of person

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  7. Lord SnimApril 12, 2009 at 10:06 PM

    Are we talking about the same Tamitha? The same cute and cuddly Tamitha, that hugged one of the Kielranny?

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  8. DeannaApril 13, 2009 at 10:29 AM

    fine...what do you want me to change??

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  9. Lord SnimApril 13, 2009 at 10:58 AM

    (Tamitha) I think she’s asleep. If only I could get to know them better, they seem very nice. Once the woman started to lightly snore I slid off the bed. “I think you can come out now. They’re sleeping, so you have to keep really quiet.” I said as a dark shadow came out of the corner of the room.

    That is what I would think the personality of Tamitha would be, but hey, its all good. Whatever floats.

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