“Hmmmm food.” R. thought as the smells flooded the submerged hut. “Will must be up to something.” After doing his morning exercises R. ventured forth from his hole in the ground. “Hmmm, Looks like great stuff Bill” Smack! Now cuddling his wounded hand with a small consolation prize, (a bit of cooked meat.) Randolph smirked and said. “Alright Will I’ll come back when its all done.”
A little further away. “I wonted to really to check out that village anyway.”
Meandering away from camp he saw a clearing weir crops had been laid and a barn. ‘A little raggedy but diffidently still in use’. Randolph determined “should be a good place to do some side jobs.” He worked his way closer trying not to be seen. Turning a corner R. Saw a milk maid cleaning up the last stall. “Pardon miss-
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don't worry i'd have smacked him anyways, for calling me bill
ReplyDeletemind if I correct some spelling errors?
ReplyDeletewanted not wonted
where not weir
definitely not diffidently?
or did you mean evidently?
also, Luke brings up another thing not yet discussed. since there are certainly other people in the story who will speak for them? just one person or all of us?
I thought the town was a days walk from your camp site..did we ever establish where it was?
ReplyDeletewe didn't establish where it was exactly, I think Luke ran into some other place however.
ReplyDeleteAs for NPCs (as they are non player characters in this game/story) I would like to let anyone control an NPC that has little or no significance, meaning the average joe. Anyone of story significance should be controlled by whomever created/introduced them, unless you feel you have a good idea what/who the character is or you have talked with the person who created, as Luke and I sometimes talk.
Certain Npcs do not get 'created' but simply exist, such as Bartholemew and I will take over that person specifically.
Any other q's?
PS at least use a spell checker luke :P
ReplyDeletethere is a little pencil on the bottom right corner of every post for correcting errors, in case you didn't know that. or if you want to add or delete a line that doesn't work (for example Jon deleted the thing about bacon).
ReplyDeleteyou can only see the pencil on the main page. or if you would prefer, you can go to the "dashboard" link located on the top right, then go to "edit post". hope that helps.
ReplyDeleteactually i just changed it to read breakfast :P but the point stands
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