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Saturday, January 31, 2009

The Commander

The commander was alone in his tent, he had just heard that they had to stop searching because of a fire that broke out. Only one soldier survived that had run into the monks, they didn't even know how many or if it had been just the one. He would need to question him, but that could wait. King Bartholomew was expecting an update on the search for the key.

He decided to leave out the part about finding it in the first place and just tell him they had only found bloodshed at the spot where it was supposed to be found. The king would be very angry, hopefully he would find a way to vent it besides on the commander.
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  1. DeannaJanuary 31, 2009 at 5:13 PM

    ok, does this guy have a name? I assumed that the guy commanding the ranks was Bart himself, so who is this his brother? Because Cordell refers to him as Bartholomew. Just need some clarification.

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