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Monday, February 9, 2009

William

(Back to posting first person)

I had seen her fight and frankly I'd been somewhat impressed. A small amount of training and she'd be a fit warrior.

"I agree," I picked up my staff as I talked. "We need to go speak with Master Moomow, I'm sure he knows more about these people and could help us immensely, possibly even tell us where they would be taking her."

After orienting myself I quickly discovered that Cordell had been taking us on a path towards the monastery all along and we got there before the sun set.

"Please come in and feel free to eat with us," I said. I paused for a moment and continued, "Normally women aren't allowed on the grounds but, friends," I paused. "Or people we hope are friends, are allowed to enter regardless of that rule. So please, come in."

I beckoned to her again as I opened the gate and motioned for her to walk in first. Master Moomow would certainly be surprised about this, perhaps pleasantly.

(Be sure to visit the sister blog for a description of the monastery.)
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9 comments:

  1. WilskFebruary 9, 2009 at 9:57 PM

    need to clarify, the inner grounds of the monastery is the part women aren't normally aloud, not the outer part that Will and Bonita were actually entering when he said that.

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  2. LetoFebruary 9, 2009 at 11:49 PM

    don't forget that Randy left a letter of warning about the raiders.

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  3. Lord SnimFebruary 10, 2009 at 10:50 AM

    He, he, he, Alright. Girl at the outer wall. Its party time at the Monastery... JK

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  4. WilskFebruary 10, 2009 at 12:08 PM

    lol oh yeah baby woot

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  5. DeannaFebruary 10, 2009 at 4:35 PM

    this story is getting a little uncomfortable for the women

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  6. WilskFebruary 10, 2009 at 4:53 PM

    oh im sorry deanna i was just being silly there but honestly in the story the monks are male and so normally they wouldnt be allowed on the grounds.

    but yeah i mean its not because there is something wrong with them its just how it is

    Srys

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  7. WilskFebruary 10, 2009 at 6:13 PM

    Oh and truthfully they were only using that as a ploy to get Will to come out anyways, of course your character doesnt know that

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  8. DeannaFebruary 11, 2009 at 12:45 PM

    I know why women aren't allowed silly, it's just that terrible things keep happening to the womenfolk in this story, especially Tristy. By the way, are we going to write about Cordell's treatment?

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  9. WilskFebruary 11, 2009 at 4:32 PM

    oh i see what you mean lol, deeper meaning for tristy that and they are strange folk

    I might write about Cordell's treatment but I need a little more info on the Order first

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