as you might have noticed, comader crooks has two sides to him. the office Crooks with attier... and hair cut. not to mention WAR-MODE!!! warning may be leathal to small children. call a doctor if gets into eyes. keep in cold damp kindoms of tyranny.
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I think the commander needs a lengthy bio. I am up for the task, if no one minds. I think Luke's character needs to be brought to life. He needs more purpose, more respect, more awe in his defeats. This man is a champion fighter given a very important task assigned by King Bartholomew himself. To beat a detachment under Crooks is a very serious matter, that I dont think has been given the proper justice. Please allow me to give this man a life story. Why is he the way he is? Why does he loath himself? Why does he have that odd twitch in his right eye? Please allow me to answer that question. Maybe Ill do a combined bio with the doctor, who seems like a very sensible gentlemen.
ReplyDeletenegative, the commander and I have special plans, sry i cannot elaborate at this time (i need to keep some surprises from you gents and Lady)
ReplyDeletei may, however, make a bio on him. I have to decide if i want bios made on all relavent and important characters and he happens to be one of them that I would prefer NOT to have anyone else control, at least not much. Thanks I should have said this earlier.
ReplyDeleteyes, he needs something. so does Cordell, maybe the doctor. I like your take on what he looks like. I think I will use that one instead of the one I made. anyone agree/disagree? Oh, the Lord Lar you created isn't completely gone. I can still see him on my blog feed if you want me to try to find all that...or whatever.
ReplyDeletei concur that would be neet D thans.
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